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course in existence, I found Jeff Kitchen's workshop to be the most
valuable in town. His techniques and tools guide one through the entire
process of screenwriting: from basic concept to general script structure
and further down to the scene level. Jeff is a master teacher who
truly understands the art and technique of the screenplay. His course
is worth its weight in gold. |
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Chris Brancato - Writer/Producer - Hoodlum,
First Wave, Thieves |
| After a two day semi-private session
with Jeff Kitchen, I sincerely believe that I learned more about
structuring a story than I had learned during the two years of my
MFA playwriting program at a top-level prestigious film school.
Mr. Kitchen provides his students with invaluable tools that, once
understood, enable a writer to easily solve major story points that
can so often lead to the dreaded "writer's block." After five minutes
of Mr. Kitchen's explanation of his theory on dilemma and crisis
I couldn't imagine how I was ever able to write a script in the
past. In fact, within two days of intense study with Jeff, I had
solved a first act problem in one of my scripts that had puzzled
me for over a year.
Throughout my four years of undergraduate work as a theater major
and my two year MFA playwriting program, I have never encountered
an instructor so thorough, so knowledgeable about the practicalities
of writing drama, or so earnest in his desire to pass along wisdom
as Jeff Kitchen. What's more, Mr. Kitchen provided such invaluable
help on a difficult script that I was commissioned to write by a
major studio, that I felt guilty not including his name in the writing
credit. So rarely an opportunity presents itself in which one is
able to gain so much knowledge in so little time
the best
money I've ever spent. A deal at ten times the price. |
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Dennis Brooks - Writer-Director |
| Jeff Kitchen's seminar is not just theory,
it's nuts and bolts. And he provides you with a set of dramaturgical
wrenches with which you can dismantle, then reassemble your screenplay
idea and verify its dramatic integrity. |
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Michael McDonnell - Producer - The Usual
Suspects |
| Jeff Kitchen’s technique and his dedication
to the art of screenwriting taught me writing skills that took my script
to a whole new level. I’ve never seen anything like what he teaches,
and it works better than anything out there. After taking his course
I got top representation and sold a script to New Line Cinema. |
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Sam Brown - Screenwriter |
| Jeff Kitchen teaches the most powerful and
practical screenwriting tools in the business. I’ve studied numerous
techniques, but Jeff is the first person I’ve met who presents a fully
developed craft that screenwriters can actually use. His expertise unlocked,
energized and structured a script that I was completely stumped on and now a
major studio is considering it for an A-list actress. |
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Jon Van Dyke - Writer-Director |
| Jeff Kitchen is the best screenwriting
teacher in the world. |
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Tom Huckabee - Executive Producer - Frailty |
| I've worked with Jeff one-on-one for many of my
projects. His tools and insights push me to explore the material in a deeper
way — and find the dramatic core of the situation. I know he's made me a
better writer and made my process more organized and more effective. I highly
recommend his book, his classes, and his personal attention. |
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Jessica Sharzer - Writer-Director - Speak -
WGA Nominated Script |
| The information that you presented was
precise, thorough & profound. The tools that you have developed are
concise & well presented, and gave me an immediate boost in dealing
with not only my own work, but in the critical analysis of the dozens
of screenplays that I deal with weekly. A well researched & practical
technique. I wish I could make it mandatory! |
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Andre Robinson, Jr. - Miramax
Films |
| Jeff Kitchen can be counted on as the most precise,
intellectually rigorous, and pragmatic of dramatic structure teachers. If you
liked McKee, then you'll love Kitchen. His gift is a selfless conveyance of the
most powerful tools for understanding and operating on dramatic structure. With
his laser sharp tools skillfully in hand, he performs the most impressive vivisection
of Shakespeare's Hamlet anywhere. He could sell his seminar for alchemy,
for it is that magical. |
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Ken Versand - Playwright |
| Thank you for sharing your extensive
knowledge of story structure with us last month. I found your class
to be user-friendly and very informative. I especially enjoyed your
technique of working backwards from the climax-it really helps to
streamline a screenplay and strengthen the throughline.
I highly recommend this class to screenwriters of all levels of
proficiency. |
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Debra Meringa - Sony Pictures |
| Your seminar for Development Executives
was by far the best seminar I have ever taken. I have found the tools
you discussed to be very instrumental in my analysis of scripts on
a day to day basis. Your class is the most comprehensive one offered
as far as making people understand how to apply the tools and make
them work. Your approach is like no other. Your vast educational training
in plays, television and films added so much more to the learning
experience. This was one class that I can honestly say has helped
me to become a stronger executive. I am very grateful to you. I recommend
your seminar to anyone in the entertainment industry who wants to
know what it takes to make a strong script. |
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Jennifer Grisanti - Director of Current
Programming, Spelling Television |
| I am the Director of Development at
Flower Films, the production company run by Nancy Juvonen and Drew
Barrymore. We have a first look deal with FOX 2000 and are wrapping
up production of our first feature, Never Been Kissed. In November
1997, I was a participant in Jeff Kitchen's Seminar for Development
Execs in Los Angeles.
Jeff's seminar was extremely interesting because it worked from
the assumption that we already knew how to do our jobs. His goal
was to give us an additional way to think about the connections
and conflicts that give rise to a clever narrative-a unique "map"
to story structure. Jeff's seminar gave us tools that we could immediately
integrate, and which were flexible and adaptable to our own processes.
The general dramaturgical approach that Jeff takes avoids the pitfalls
of formulae. It's a broad-based theory with a distinguished history,
not a crutch or half-baked "shortcut." And it works. Smart and effective,
it's a great tool for anyone developing story material. |
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Stephanie Savage - Director of
Development, Flower Films |
| From within the swarm of gimmicky screenwriting
seminars and trendy new how-to's, it is Jeff Kitchen's approach, relying
heavily on the classic principles of dramatic structure and logic,
that emerges as truly innovative. His technique is the answer for
anyone seeking practical tools with which to diagnose script problems,
generate effective solutions, or transform story ideas into compelling
drama. Jeff's seminars are aggressive; they are work sessions that
produce real results immediately. Come with your sleeves rolled up. |
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Erin Quigley - Producer, Development
Exec., 23 Red Prods. |
| Jeffrey Kitchen is a dynamic and intelligent
teacher who thrills at challenging his students while forcing them
to analyze and test the dramatic mettle of their screenplays. As a
development executive and as a screenwriter, I often utilize the reliable
set of tools I learned at his seminar. I am better at my work because
of them. |
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Marina Muhlfriedel - V.P. Development,
Santa Monica Pictures |
| Your screenwriting seminar was enormously
helpful. In one weekend, you managed to impart all the tools necessary
to take a vague idea and turn it into a well developed, tightly
structured dramatic map for the screen. Through your painstaking
examples and diagrams, Polti's Thirty-six Dramatic Situations leap
from the annals of antiquity to become viable creative tools for
your students. Moreover, after the creative ideas begin to flow,
your methods help the writer harness, examine, and capture those
ideas magically on paper.
I highly recommend your seminar for beginning and advanced screenwriters,
as well as anyone who wishes to "get inside" a script, either to
revise or to appreciate the craft of the writer. |
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Tamara Woolfork - Walt Disney
Motion Pictures Group |
| I've taken them all--McKee, Truby, Walter--and
the difference in your instruction was that you provided a clear understanding
of several intellectually rigorous and creative methods for solving
the problems of story structure... AND THEN YOU SHOWED THE CLASS HOW
TO USE THEM! After applying your approaches to the rewrite of my feature
script, I was thrilled when my producer's response was, 'Great! Now
you've got it right.' |
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J. Marshall New - Screenwriter |
| The seminar is brilliant, practical and rich
with concepts and working tools--not formula. Kitchen has synthesized a
profound body of knowledge into a working method you can't find anywhere else. |
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Susan Robeson - Writer/Producer |
| I wanted to take the time to tell
you what an extraordinary experience your weekend intensive workshop
was for me. My entire approach to writing changed in the most beneficial
ways imaginable. As a result of the four tools you teach, I can
never imagine myself going hungry for an idea or the technique to
put it together. At the most fundamental level, you have proved
to me that it is always possible to work as a writer. No more waiting
around for the "moment" to hit me-with your techniques, I can and
will work any time I please. These four tools allow me to access
my imagination, develop strong, solid stories, and outline a screenplay
or stage play quickly and efficiently. If Hollywood is ever to experience
a Second Golden Age of Film, if the Art of Great Story Telling returns
to cinema and theater, I guarantee Jeff Kitchen will have a lot
to do with it.
Having experienced the seminar and utilizing the techniques daily,
I still cannot fathom the magnanimous effects they are having on
my work and my output. I have never worked so fast and so well.
The tools have allowed me to focus my talents in ways I had not
previously imagined. I am certain that should more professional
screenwriters discover Jeff's techniques, Hollywood will see another
Golden Era. |
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Michael Nourse - Screenwriter
and award-winning playwright. |
| I recently attended Jeffrey Kitchen's
screenwriting seminar and cannot praise it too highly. He is one
of the best teachers I've ever had. His attributes are that rare
to find. First, he is clear and concise and is a master of the techniques
he teaches. Secondly, he has infinite patience and instinctive generosity
so that everyone feels that their project is worthwhile, even as
he uncovers its flaws.
The technique he teaches is truly extraordinary and Jeffrey, it
turns out, may be the only person in the world using it in this
particular way. I have taken other screenwriting courses and his
is head and shoulders above them all. As a result of Jeffrey's course
I feel much more secure in my writing. I finally feel that my script
will have the best possible structure. |
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Mira Tweti - Screenwriter |
| Jeff Kitchen's innovative system is totally
unlike any other approach to story analysis I've seen. It is an excellent
and wholly satisfying marriage of meaty academic theory with basic
screenwriting practicalities. It shows you a useful new way of focusing
dramatic tension with laser-like precision, beat by beat. What is
great about his methods is that they can be of assistance to both
those writers and producers devoted to the traditional Hollywood three-act
structure, and those who would like to try something different. Whether
used as a supplement to more conventional means of evaluating a script
(Linda Seger, Syd Field, Joseph Campbell, et al.) or used by itself,
Jeff Kitchen's system can be really helpful. |
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Darryl Mori - former Director
of Development, Sanford/Pillsbury Prods. |
Nothing pains a writer more than to see a great
premise stifled by shoddy execution and a lack of craft. In his courses and now
in his books, Jeff Kitchen gives writers a smart, creative, systematic approach
to story building that eliminates many of the problems that haunt novices and
veterans alike. His take on Dilemma shows how to inject a serious dose of dramatic
action into any genre, while Sequence, Proposition, Plot offers a surefire way to
build and 'road test' a story before facing the relentless scrutiny of industry
professionals. Jeff doesn't deal only with the mechanics of story construction;
with tools like with the 36 Dramatic Situations and the Enneagram, he helps
to jump-start your creativity.
Unlike some well-known writing gurus, who offer pithy insights and systems with
no practical application, Jeff explains his 'tools', and then demonstrates how to
apply them to bullet-proof your script. He shows you how to work smarter, not harder.
After completing a one-on-one intensive with Jeff, I reworked a script that had garnered
favorable comments but no real interest. Using Jeff's techniques, I succeeded in eliminating
some glaring weaknesses that I had previously failed to see. Not long afterward, a producer
came onboard and optioned the material. I now apply Jeff's approach to all my material.
My only regret is that I didn't meet him sooner.
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Lou Spirito - Screenwriter |
| I like to distinguish between two
types of screenwriting teachers: those with a limited background
JUST in film and television, and those with a mastery of dramatic
techniques that have not only worked for centuries on stage; but
also film and television. Jeffrey fits the latter characterization.
Years ago, I was fortunate to begin my ongoing training with the
generation of masters that first wrote for stage, then live television,
and then film. Jeffrey is one of the few contemporary writer-teachers
with a grounding in those ageless techniques of good drama, a tradition
rarely passed to current generations. |
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George Higginson - Screenwriter |
| I've taken all the big name workshops,
but none of them have helped me as much as Jeff's because his is
hands-on and interactive. Rather than simply listening to a lecture
or analyzing successful films, Jeff's workshop made me use what
he teaches on my own script, and I got immediate feedback, ensuring
that I was applying the tools correctly. This is the only screenwriting
workshop that I know of that provides one-on-one attention.
Most screenwriting workshops and books offer only knowledge or
understanding; Jeff takes the next step and teaches application
as well. Jeff's workshop gave me a working model to develop a script
from, sharpening and focusing the original idea into a taut dramatic
dilemma, to structuring the cause and effect events in reverse (beginning
with the end in mind), and resulting in a unified drama with clarity
and power.
Jeff's approach to screenwriting is important because rather than
offering gimmicks or quick-fix solutions, he teaches a challenging
method requiring plenty of hard work up front, but also insuring
a minimum of rewrites. |
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Barry Goode - Screenwriter |
| Many thanks for your recent seminar. I
am a serious screenwriting student, enrolled in the program at UCLA,
and I have taken nearly every seminar offered. Unlike other seminars
and so many classes, your method is more than instructive-it is distinctive.
You offer principles, methods, and tools that are not only specific,
but very unique as well. For the first time I gained insight and true
understanding into the thirty-six dramatic situations and Aristotle.
Your presentation of the Wm. T. Price model was mind boggling. No
serious student of screenwriting should fail to take this course. |
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Rocky Walsborn - Screenwriter |
| It's the first system I've encountered
that deals directly with taking a raw idea and developing it in all
its dramatic potential into a structurally sound script. |
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Jack Haigis - Screenwriter |
| I truly enjoyed your writing class and
consider the techniques you convey to be the best I've experienced
for writing a cohesive script. I have taken the McKee's and David
Freeman's as well as many other script and structure classes around
town, but your class was the first that actually helped me WRITE the
script. The intimate workshop is conducive to getting a lot of work
done quickly. I would highly recommend this class to anyone who is
serious about writing a script, instead of listening to how one writes
one. |
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Tim Carpenter - Screenwriter |
| My story was stuck in episodic flatland. Jeff
Kitchen's tools for erecting dramatic structure helped isolate the plot so
I could go back in and drive the drama home. |
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Malissa Daniel - Screenwriter |
| Tired of writing teachers, books and seminars
that teach you how to be a movie critic rather than a screenwriter?
Jeff Kitchen assumes you know what you like and why. His class concentrates
on the nuts and bolts of actually getting scenes on paper and how
to make them add up to an effective story. It's not formula. It's
a discipline that teaches dramatic elements you put into black and
white, not ethereal concepts for clever conversation at cocktail parties. |
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Ross Blaufarb - Screenwriter |
| I'm no stranger to screenwriting workshops,
very reputable ones at that. But taking yours was a real eye-opener.
My dream now is not just to be a screenwriter, but a bona fide dramatist.
You brought storytelling into a whole new dimension for me. |
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Melinda Lewis - Screenwriter |
| What an accelerated learning experience!
Jeffrey Kitchen's class on play and screen writing gave me so much
insight and knowledge about the plotting process. His teaching style
is intense, thorough and brilliant. |
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Ted Zalewski - Playwright |
| Jeff, your seminar was perfectly organized,
well thought out, and highly informative. I can take the knowledge
I've received and apply it to any concept or idea. All barriers and
obstacles have been removed, and I don't foresee writer's block as
something that will hinder me in the future. |
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Timothy Williams - Screenwriter |
| Your respect for the creative process
is refreshing. The methods work from beginning to end. They can be
used to begin a play with the barest nuance of an idea, or to carefully
evaluate a finished screenplay. It is rare to find an individual who
wants to completely share a creative process. It is also rare to find
a class that is non-competitive enough for all members to openly share
their unfinished works-in-progress. A remarkable amount of growth
takes place in your workshop because you generously set the tone of
this personal and group acceptance. |
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Mary Armour Stock - Screenwriter |
| Jeff has a special talent in being able
to apply his techniques and principles of dramatic plot construction
to his students' work such that understanding emerges. Much of this
is due to his at-ease personality and willingness to share. He creates
an optimum learning experience. |
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Lindley Volkwein - Screenwriter |
| I had the good fortune to be able
to council with Jeff Kitchen, whose expertise and insight into the
structure, characterization and thematic development of the script
were invaluable aids to my ability to clarify and articulate my
intentions as an artist.
Though playwrights are often the happy recipients of advice from
directors, actors, agents and others, the lucidity and objectivity
of Jeff's analysis of the material were unquestionably helpful and
added immensely to the rewriting process, as well as my ability
to guide both director and cast. Should the occasion arise, I would
not hesitate to call upon Jeff's guidance again, and can wholeheartedly
recommend and commend his professionalism. |
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John Lewter - Award-winning playwright |
| I know of no one with a better grasp of
dramatic principle and construction than Mr. Kitchen. |
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Irving Fiske - Playwright |
| Jeff knows his craft and he has that type
of compassionate, earthy personality that not only makes life easier,
but expands the mission into great heights. Right away I knew I was
observing a professional at work and had no doubt the job would get
done! I also witnessed an interesting technique and/or approach to
the art form that proved to be a valuable tool in opening one's mind
and providing opportunities that previously appeared to be non-existent. |
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Gary Corbin - Playwright |
| In April 1998 I took Jeff Kitchen's
course. I felt like I had stood in front of a cannon that went off.
Jeff not only presented me with the most extraordinary story creation
and analysis tools that I've ever seen, he also taught me how to
use them. The bulk of story structure tools out there are essentially
story analysis tools. One learns to say smart things as to why stories
don't work, but one still can't make his story work. Kitchen provides
you with story creation tools. In most workshops that I've taken-and
I took them all-the teachers presented the working of their tools
by applying them to classics. I don't say that the analysis of classics
is not an important part of teaching, but it is not enough. One
also has to teach how a tool works when applied to an unfinished
work (which is not yet a masterpiece). Jeff teaches you how to use
the tools.
Only a teacher who is not afraid, who is unbecoming can free the
creator in everyone. Jeff is capable is holding the tension between
utter fearlessness and vulnerability. Since attending that workshop
my writing is more daring, more outrageous. My argument is more
complete. My story is better dramatized. |
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Arijan Verboon - Writer-Director |
| I cannot think of a single person, experienced
or otherwise, who would not benefit from your clear-minded approach
to the high art of writing for the stage or screen. The way that you
use the 36 Dramatic Situations to both analyze and construct a dramatic
form is not only clear but extremely practical. It seems to me what
your method does is to demystify a good deal of what has been presented
as one of the greatest mysteries of all time: how to create an effective
drama. |
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John Allen - Playwright |
| Since the last night of the seminar, I've
been systematically applying the tools toward a 3rd draft of my script.
Already I can see how the plot diagram that we figured out has refocused,
tightened and substantially strengthened the structure. I have taken
your advice and written note cards with new concepts-many of which
were used in my novel-to add unpredictable, provocative and unexpected
elements to the basic drama line. I believe your tools, method and
conveyance are not only expert and ground breaking, but caring as
well. For it is one thing to simply feign interest in one's concept,
but it takes an entirely separate discipline to actually remember
story line, help augment same, and work with the writer toward applying
the tools. In essence, you more than practice what you preach! |
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Raoul Peter Mongilardi - Screenwriter |
| For a long time now I have been searching
for a teacher who won't swamp me in theory and leave me there, or
critique my play to death, making well-meaning suggestions that destroy
my original story and intent. I feel I have found just such a teacher
in Mr. Kitchen-a teacher who has given me complete control and power
over the destiny of my dramatic writing ideas. With Jeff Kitchen's
creative writing tools in my hands, I am not only able to create strong,
unified foundations for my plays, I am also able to take my plays
in any direction I choose and make it work. |
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Aileen Kilburn - Playwright |
| In one of Jeff Kitchen's seminars, one
will learn more in twenty-four hours than in five screenwriting books
put together. After taking Jeff's seminar, you will certainly grasp
the elements necessary to get your screenplay or play off the ground. |
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Paul Manijak - Screenwriter |
| Back in 1990 I went looking for what I
call 'the Key to the Drama" by reading for an MA in Playwriting. But
even when I came top of my year and my play won a prize at the Edinburgh
Fringe Festival, I still had not found it-until, that is, I took your
seminar. So thank you from the bottom of my heart for such a stimulating
enlightenment. |
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Lyn Gambles - Screenwriter, Playwright |
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