| The question isn't whether or not there are mountains
of bad screenplays in Hollywood-even an occasional cineplex-goer
back in Cleveland can tell you there are. Seen any movies lately?
The question, of course, is what's wrong with the scripts, and that's
one the studios, with their mill-like development processes, never
demonstrate much knack for answering.
That's where Jeff Kitchen comes in. The writing guru/script doctor
has made it his mission to help movie scribes-both the wannabe and
professional varieties-improve their work with a system of structural
tools aimed at pumping up the dramatic power of material. In seminars
he conducts in LA and other cities the Los Angeles-based "dramaturg"
outlines the function of these tools in hopes writers will use them
to make their scripts more original, logical and engaging.
In Hollywood, where the exploding interest in screenwriting has
led to a lucrative and sometimes parasitic cottage industry in training
and consulting services, such seminars are nothing new. Bookstores
have entire sections devoted to the subject, and advertisements
scream out lists of blockbusters allegedly written by teachers'
alumni. Advice on writing-mostly anecdotes and vague discussions
of studio pet theories such as the infamous "three act" structure-is
all too plentiful, and often seems targeted more at giving moral
support to aspirants than nuts-and-bolts training.
Kitchen's approach is a more serious attempt to infuse screenwriting
with theories of classic dramaturgy-the study of dramatic composition-and
as such is more demanding of students, who may not be prepared to
apply Aristotle's concept of dilemma to their buddy-cop thriller
or syllogistic logic to their broad action-comedy. But Kitchen argues
that such knowledge is exactly what most screenwriters lack.
"People tend to be pretty much tripping at the end of the 30-hour
seminar, because not only has their script come up quite a bit,
but they now have a set of tools with which to approach any material,"
he says. "Not that they're necessarily an expert in the application
of the tools, but they see that the tools really work, and that
if they apply themselves to them they can have something that actually
works."
Kitchen, whose usually soft-spoken demeanor grows intensely animated
when discussing subjects such as the difference between story and
drama, developed his techniques through characteristically unorthodox
means. A self-educated screenwriter and movie buff, he studied informally
under the tutelage of Irving Fiske, a playwright whose work received
acclaim in the '30s and '40s. "He gave me these two books to read,
and I went off and read them for three years," Kitchen says. One
of the books Fiske gave him was a pioneering dramaturgical study
by William Thompson Price, a turn-of-the-century teacher whose students
went on to write 24 Broadway hits, but whose own scholarly work
has largely been forgotten.
Kitchen based one of his "tools" on Price's model for determining
the key dramatic questions in a story. In his seminars, Kitchen
teaches this technique as well as other more common theories of
drama, such as material from Aristotle's much quoted Poetics and
the widely misunderstood Thirty-six Dramatic Situations by Georges
Polti. Kitchen is the first to admit that the techniques are tricky
to master, but students who work through his process often see results
that are
well, dramatic.
"The material almost always improves extensively, because the tools
are so powerful," he says. "I have increasing respect for the tools
because I've seen a trend form in so many pieces of work. In the
30-hour seminar, it almost always improves substantially. That is
not to say that they might not have already had a very well-done
piece, but that it can highlight the strengths of that piece, isolate
and extract those, and still help take it to another level-even
if it's only organizing what's already there."
His three-day "Action-Thriller Screenwriting Seminar" includes
two days of instruction on how his techniques work, and a third
day of applying them to writers' individual scripts in a one-day
"Development Session." While the development workshop is optional,
Kitchen thinks most students require some practice applying the
techniques to their own work. He expands on the workshop format
in his 30-hour intensive program.
"Fully half of what I'm teaching is what in hell are you actually
applying these structural tools to?" he says. "You want to be the
master of these tools-you don't want to follow them slavishly. You
want to be the judo master throwing them around."
When talking about writing, Kitchen tends to speak in violent terms-"torturing
the protagonist," "putting the screws to" or "plotting to murder"
an audience, "attacking material"-and this aggressive tone fits
his approach to the craft. In his workshop sessions, he and his
students vigorously assault scripts in hopes of injecting them with
what Kitchen likes to call "dangerous ideas."
"In my 30-hour seminar, I will attempt to shake their material
up, and a big part of my job in that format is to go around throwing
hand grenades into their ideas, so that I'm violently challenging
a lot of their stuff. Not in the sense that, ''This sucks,' but
like, 'What if you tried this?' I'm not by any means trying to dictate
their plot to them, but I have a great deal of freedom in that I
don't have to make things work, and I can blow things up quite extensively.
But I can often take them to a new level in terms of daring of thinking
in general."
While Kitchen teaches specific techniques for doing so, he stresses
that he isn't instructing students to learn any particular formula
or to follow any particular "rules." If anything, he's more interested
in breaking conventions.
"The main thing is that anything can work, and either it works
or it doesn't. If it's somebody milking a cow onstage for two hours
and people line up around the block for six months, then it works.
Even if it has utterly no structure. Some of the wildest movies
have utterly no structure and violate everything, and they're totally
fun to watch."
Kitchen has ongoing seminars with hands-on development sessions;
action-thriller screenwriting with some of the top action writers
in the business as guest speakers; special workshops for development
executives; and private courses. He can be reached at (213) 243-3817.
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